Wednesday, December 26, 2007

gaze

these dreams keep me awake
they need my open eyes

between the seeing and the not seeing
I see you.

Between the concealed and the expressed
I gaze at you.

2 comments:

bhumika said...

between the seeing and the not seeing
I see you.

lovely. i like your style of writing in blank verse - sth i personally use quite often

thanks for dropping by my blog :)

TheQuark said...

To my brain which can connect weirdest of the dots, your photo reminded me of that tantrik baba in Ramsay brother's flicks whose USP was this eyelid expression. [please don't take this as any claims of familiarity or an attempt at insult]

Nice lines.